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The Lead Is Incorrect; Anyone Else?

I'm sure the writer of this article thought the lead was clever, but it's wrong. Now the headline is fine, but check out the lead:

If the answer is Ken Jennings and his record $920,960 so far in "Jeopardy!" winnings, the question must be how does he do it?

A curious mind, good memory and astute buzzer technique, said Jennings, a Utah software engineer who will make an unprecedented 29th appearance on the syndicated quiz show Monday night.

My rewrite:

If the answer is a curious mind, good memory and astute buzzer technique, the question must be how has Ken Jennings won a record $920,960 so far on Jeopardy?

Jennings, a Utah software engineer, will make an unprecedented 29th appearance on the syndicated quiz show Monday night.

I used the second paragraph to the story to show what I did with the rewrite.

The writer for the AP needs to brush up on his Jeopardy rules. Alex would have ruled that person's question incorrect.

Monday, July 12, 2004 at 02:50 PM in Games |

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